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If only it had some drums.

It's too empy without drums, so consequently it gets really repettative (in the bad way) after about 45 seconds or so. Other than that everything sounds great and fits together well; something not often heard on NG with synthasizers.

It's just a real shame you didn't put the drums in to fill it out. Can't wait to hear more though.

PowPowSamurai responds:

ahh yes drums. well this was an experimental track. I wanted to test out a few things with the "trance" genre. well thanks for the review! i'll keep it in mind! =D

It's alright.

I agree with gonzilla0, the background synth is too much... in the foreground. It sounds messy, like you're trying to cover up the rest of the song. When you get to 36 seconds it's all you can really hear.

Tone down the synth, make it sharper. Having said that the intro is perfectly fine so leave the synth alone for that part.

It's almost there, just a litle bit more work and it'll be a 10/10

Randomizor responds:

Thanks for reviewing xP

Great

An excellent piece with good progression. I also like the guitar solo, it fit in well because It wasn't over the top. everything went well together.

Unfortunately I didn't like the bass on the drums. It's too repetative, try using a 2 bar pattern rather than one; it works much better in songs like this with a slower melody.

Keep up the good work, and I hope to hear more good music from you.

NemesisTheory responds:

Thank you!

The bass on the drums were actually in a 4bar pattern, but they did indeed keep looping! I'd replace them now if I could but I can't edit the song anymore. XD But you're definitely right. You may call me lazy if you want. ;_;

Thank you, and you will I hope! <3

So close

You would have recieved 10 from me, but you let yourself down on the drums.

The pattern is good, but considering you had an electric kit, you should have chosen some better sounds. The ones you are using are dull and soft, whereas rock needs something crisp and with alot of attack.

Listen to something like bon jovi. I know that Bon Jovi is a slightly different type of rock, but listen to the drums.

Other than that, keep up the good work; you have great potential.

cazok responds:

Sadly I didn't have the very best sounds at hand when recording this.
I had no idea this would be such a success when I first made it, so I didn't spend time to record the drums over and over with different kits.

Thank you...

for making music Lasj.

Best song i have heard on the Portal up 'till now.

Lasj responds:

Really? =) Cheers, mate :)

-yoink...

excellent song, deserves all my 5 and space on my hard drive.

keep up the good work.

raretools responds:

will do ^^ thx

Excellent.

The song is excellent; Written nicely and with a lovely range of instruments.

Deserves to be higher on the best list on the front of the audio portal, far better than some of those that are higher up.

Keep up the good work, It's on my playlist now.

Kimken responds:

wow, thanks.
eh, the toplist is weird. heard really good songs there, and some bad ones.

Good.

It's quite good, and i like the way everything fits and how it all flows.

However it doesn't have any kind of climax.

Still, good job, keep it up!

Yodamanjaro responds:

Thanks for the review!

Excellent.

Great Song. Yoinked for later listening.

Think people may say they've heard it before because of the common chord patterns on the synths.

Nostrap responds:

Or perhaps because this is a remake of a song I submitted earlier???

Nice!

Nice song, would work well as an ambient, soundtrack along with anykind of sinister scene, or just in my playlist.

nice one.

Waterflame responds:

thank you :D thats nice of you ^^ glad you liked it!

(sorry to use this space to write to someone else but, lol, up there, i ment to write "something" not tomsehing. whatever that is o.O)

You notice English spellings alot on American websites...

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